Unfinished business let's call it
Why else would it jab like a stab?
Why else would well wishes amount
Before dragging themselves forward to spill forth?
She thought it was in the past
It had already hurt with the coming of her
A promise of old reverberated in her soul
With the shock of a whole another, she shattered...
... She picked up the pieces
Refusing to let herself fall apart
It was over, wasn't it?
May He; The All Able Lord
Bless her with her own share worthy of cherishing!
Ameen...
6 comments:
brill!
New reader, with such a concise yet humbling view!
Thanx much!
Do keep visiting :)
Very honest conveying of message....
Your expressions are always subtle and full of integrity...I adore this distinct note.
Life indeed is all about getting into pieces and putting them together again...but, hopes often offer somewhat centrifugal impulse to lose into expectations...adequately pampered by unsolicited dreams...then they not only burn themselves..but also the soul that carries them so lovingly...
My regards,
My dear Sir! Wonderful to hear from you, as always... Life indeed is so, isn't it... If only we would be equipped with something worthwhile that would be able to fight off such burns and pains even before they singe or creep in... No matter how many the falls in the past, the new ones help us get on with it faster, but do not take away the initial impact that comes with every fall, unavoidably so... atleast so is my take on it with whatever little my life as yet has taught me...
Perhaps resilience from some more years would enable me better? Perhaps some more years are not in my destiny? Perhaps could be so much, yet not anything at all...
Perhaps...
What the most admiring in your expressions is integrity...my salute !
I fear destiny..it rings on "perhaps" endlessly on my ears and scare me more( believe me I wrote some odd about it http://saibarman.blogspot.com/2008/03/dreams.html )and I sing on ABBA to get out of its snares...I sing on...I dream on...to be forever sucked into a final fall to the abyss...yes, I sing on....
"I have a dream, a song to sing, to help me cope with anything
If you see the wonder of the fairy tale
You can take the future even if you fail
I believe in angels, something good in everything I see
I believe in angels, when I know the time is right for me
I'll cross the stream, I have a dream"
My sincere wishes, dear friend !!
Ooh... I just ADORE Abba! This used to be one of my Favouritestest songs back in 12th grade, 1997-98!!! Wow at how time seems to bury some pleasant memories... Thanx for bringing the song back into my head :) Beautiful words and melody too!
Re: your link... ill get there and comment there itself when i get around to it, promise :)
Best wishes...
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